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Hmm....

Well this is interesting. First when the intro is finished it kinda mashes together. Im not saying i didnt like it, but they seemed like they were fighting more than they were in harmony. The background and the snths i mean. The background needs a different preset because it doesnt complement the lead. The first background seemed like a chiptune, and considering that ur lead is an odd one it needs to complement it. Like soul eater, if you seen the anime. Sous need to match soul wavelengths when they become a Meister and weapon set. The background and lead needs to match up in some form to become a song. Also the background dint seem to have a set of match chords. Can you try to fix that because it made me almost say no to the song. But despite all that im writing here thats only part of the song. The scat part was epic. KEEP IT! Also try adding a scat sample inside of your song as you play it for it to actually be an obvious tribute to John Scatman(Rest In Peace). Overall its good, but needs some minor Tweaking.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

IceMasterDlux responds:

Wow, long review! I appreciate it though. I will think about changing the bass, because I thought it might sound a little weird. But that doesn't mean I will! This far in the song, I will probably keep it how it is already, but I value your opinion nonetheless. But I don't think I know what you meant about the chords. I'm pretty sure they're fine. But I'll give it another listen. And I'm glad you like the scat part, lol!! Scatman John was a great man, he really and truly was. I will miss him. Anyhow, I am glad that you liked it overall! Thanks a bunch for the long review, I am always glad to see when people put a lot of thought into their reviews! Thanks again my friend, and God bless you!
!IceMasterDlux ><>

Nice.

But your kick is too flat. try to lessen up on compressing it(If you used a compressor) And focus on reverb. That will give it a good feeling too it. This could be better, and besides the kick but that guitar u had in there didnt match up with the entire song volume. Try mastering everything. Oh and Make sure u use maximus on the kick too. That one pop song melody nearly made me throw up. Never choose that 16 year old boys music AGAIN!. No matter how popular he is his voice is computer altered, and that pisses me off because he has no talent then. NEVER AGAIN! Sorry, but as u can see i hate that kid's music.
Regards...
Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

SWEET!

I knew you would make it again!
ANYWAY, lets get to the review. You know how i am XD.
The kick...yes. Just perfect. Nice filtering! The beginning lead i wasnt fond of, but the melody made me forget about it. Im gonna say this once and only once. USE FRUITY PHASER! ITS AWESOME! I cant express how all trance songs need it. I Want you bassline now XD. I have so much trouble making one, so im gonna ask if i could borrow yours. Please? Yea, but a 10/10. I should make it nine because of no Fruity Phaser, but im not mean XD. No really great job!
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

AikaMusic responds:

Haha just because you think its awesome doesn't mean i do :P and sure thing which bassline? theres the standard off beat and then the fast one.

Why do people Zerobomb this?

Its pretty cool. I like the melody, but please bring future songs up a couple of octaves. Low tones just get to me if they arent in harmony with a high tone. Im not saying this isnt cool, but please. ANYWAY, try adding more reverb on the synth. I love you lead(As always) and overall this deserves an 8/10 and a 5/5. Also, you think you can make another song to top Better off Alone? Im still sure thats the best song you made. Also the best song on Newgrounds that i reviewed> U said last time i probably heard better somewhere. LIE! I have heard alot of trance, dance, house and techno in the last 4-5 years, and i havent heard anything better than that song. But anyway if you are gonna do a remix i suggest No go go for launch by Dark By Design. You know the melody that comes in at the middle of the song? Yea that one. Well getting formalities aside i would like to say that your lead is compatible with fruity phaser. Not the dark one the other one. The kick is flat so add some reverb on dat Bish. Good song, but add some more high notes.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

Man i have been gone WAAY to long.

WAts up Opaix. Rememba me? Anway, this doesnt feel like house. I cant describe it but maybe try lifting the entire song up a couple of octaves and changing the noted here and there.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

ElectroLord99 responds:

lol if you read the description, it's supposed to sound the way it does XD
but thanks for the review! :) greatly appreciated from you. i love your constructive criticism :D

Trancecrafter.

When i get good enough i will steal your style. I love everything you make. Im not soft, but every song i hear from u stirs up emotions. ANYWAY lets get to the review. The intro was good, but Im not particularly interested in them. However i felt as though it was too long. A minute would've been enough but i think it went on for two. It didn't change how i felt about the song so...yea. The part where the song "breaks free" After the intro was beautiful. I loved it. But when it smoothies out i was disappointed to be honest. I thought the entire song would've been intense as the climax. But even though this was unexpected i still enjoyed every bit of it. So 9.5/10. But im rounding it up :D.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

cool

But that first synth that came in at the beginning just through me off. It was good when everything else came in but when its alone its hell to my ears. The entire melody composition was good, and i loved the entire thing.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

CAK3MAT3 responds:

thx man :)

There we go.

I like your choice of plugins. The delay was good for a song like this. The kick wasn't flat, but it wasn't over powering. Dont worry though, i have a bad habit of overpowering my kicks and im not satisfied unless others overpower there too. Not your fault. This is a good song. The reverse thing(Idk what that was) kinda turned me off you know. The second lead could be sharper you know. Just a bit. I like it though so it really doesn't matter. Good job. P.S. Could you fix up stormcaller? That song had some good potential and i would love to hear it with ur skill now.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

Kieda responds:

Yah I guess I could do that someday, it was somewhat good and could definitely be better.

Thanks for the review, seems that I shouldn't use that reverse snare anymore!

Awesome...

Its just amazing. The riff in the beginning hooked me and the general key was a good choice. I Simply love everything And now im jealous of how many views you get in 8 hours. But you deserve it so..yea good job.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
DJ Chaos

Could be improved.

The kick was too flat. For a song like thin u have to use something with bass on it. If you used the delay bank then nice job, but u need reverb, or a better set of settings because again the song seemed dead. I suggest a compressor if you have one. Also this is only useful if you use FL studio 9. I Can help with the song be adding the things i listed and if you want to u can send me the flp so i can help.

Kieda responds:

I made this pretty long time ago and I have been improving whole the time =].

Thanks for offering to help tho.

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