Did you use FL studio?
If you did then how did u get the effects to work out?
the echo, the fade in, and the mastering?
Any way time for constructive critisism. Bass was a little too heavy. The melody seemed muffled in the song, and the bass itself produced too much distortion. I can see you tried hard, but keep these thing in mind. 9/10 and 4/5.
Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos