Nice.
But your kick is too flat. try to lessen up on compressing it(If you used a compressor) And focus on reverb. That will give it a good feeling too it. This could be better, and besides the kick but that guitar u had in there didnt match up with the entire song volume. Try mastering everything. Oh and Make sure u use maximus on the kick too. That one pop song melody nearly made me throw up. Never choose that 16 year old boys music AGAIN!. No matter how popular he is his voice is computer altered, and that pisses me off because he has no talent then. NEVER AGAIN! Sorry, but as u can see i hate that kid's music.
Regards...
Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos