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Darkfire96

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Man z3ta is awesome!

I Love this, but to be honest the best part about the song was its bass. That was probably the best thing you couldve kept and i didnt hear any. I loved everything else, but this song needed that bass. Oh well. This song is still god anyways. Sorry for not giving professional Criticism and giving an opinion.

ShootingStar responds:

Alright - I can see that, I think there was a bass, maybe just not as loud as you would like.
Thanks for the comments! :)

ShootingStar

Sweet!

I see that this came completely from emotion. Sorry ive been gone Semore, but i had a workload of old songs that were dieing to be updated. Now about this song.
Yes i have felt this way. I Like your choice of plugin, but the piano either should've came in later, or you shouldve extended the entire song altogether because the pianos amplified the effect of the song. Now going into the emotional part of the song i have chills listening to this. I never did before, and now i do. I Think i shed a tear. I my opinion the pianos should have never come in at all, but this came from pure emotion so i have absolutely no say in this. I really enjoyed this piece and i hope to hear more.
Angels Gone Rogue

/-DJ Chaos-\

Semaphore responds:

thank you so much Darkfire =)

Sorry if i become annoying but...

I WILL press you to finish this. Expect major spamming on reasons why to finish this song. Or at least giving me the FLP so i can finish it. I Like the entire song, but i dont like the length. Its under 2:30 :/. Songs like that seem to waste major potential. Nvm i wont spam you. I dont have the will to spam. So please finish this. Sorry for the amateur review, but i really cant find anything with this song. No need to sign my DJ name as this wasnt a professional Review in the least.

Hey dude

Try reuploading this at at least 128k. They had uped the file size limit to 15 megs now. I really want good quality, and 96k is a no no for me. First thing i have to rant about is did you change you instruments from the other songs? If you did then WHY THE HELL DID YOU DO THAT?! If no then just fix the feeling because im not getting that feeling i get from the others. Also the song seems....compressed slightly bad.. What did u use to compress it? And if you filter it then let up on it because the song sounds a bit...held back. Other than those things i pointed out this would be perfect.
Angels Gone Rogue

/-DJ Chaos-\

i liek it

like the guy under me said it does have a futuristic theme to it. Well not futuristic more like post-apocalypse type thing. The song seems empty a bit so add a second pad. The bass could be heavier, but it doesnt matter. it would be great if u lengthened it, but its cool as it is. Could you send me the flp Marc? Thanks in advance.
Angels Gone Rogue

/-DJ Chaos-\

Dommshotz responds:

what flp?

Lol Happy bithday.

Because the 8th was my birthday! I had got a ps3 >.>
Its an intro, so i cant really say anything now. Finish it then i will say something.

ElectroLord99 responds:

haha nice :D happy birthday man!

So i get to help? Sweet...

Well first thing that i would say is to change this song into a hard trance. Give if a good pad. I recommend z3ta+ And i do have the files in case you need it. Second this is to change the lead to a bassline. For a song like this i imagine that a....i guess raspier sounding synth would do the job. And knock this up an octave. It feels to dark. Thats all i could think of now.

ElectroLord99 responds:

lol all this has is a beat and bass, just an idea for stuff i guess haha XD
but yeah, it would be awesome if u could help me out! :D
send me a PM

Im gonna get as good as you one day!

But for now im gonna learn how to master and come up with good enough melodies. I can say that im somewhat good, but i could really use some tips for my songs. Mind coming and reviewing my New song Better Dreams? Also what plugin did u use for the lead synth. And are those vocals from a rock song? Im pretty sure i heard it before. Oh well. Anyway the pianos were perfect in the song, but the bells were kinda out of place. But i like it that way, so please dont change it. I have to admit that hearing this song inspired me to keep uploading to Newgrounds in spite of the zerobombers. Your bassline....i want it so bad...
Can you make a sample? I dont have every plugin in the world, and it would help alot if i had that bassline. When you finish this I'd recommend that you add more vocals when the song takes some time to "breathe". So like after the intense part you can have a breakdown where some really good vocals would kick in.
Well i really want this song to be finished so good luck. Also can you help me with mastering? I really am starting to need those skills right now.
Angels Gone Rogue

/-DJ Chaos-\

Lithorph responds:

Thank you for your review. And yes ill check your stuff out.
Im really not as good as you appear to think ^^
The vocals were from an acapella pack, think it was like mutteki vocals or something. What i did was, i cut the words out and then changed the notes on the vocal to fit the bassline.
The bass is something ive been trying to master, its a pitchbass. This song isn't that well done, i will post alot better in the future as im still learning stuff.
I could help you with some stuff, but the musicmaking is all up to you. You need to really work hard if you want to be a good musician.
If you want to learn the basics of mastering , check youtube, kick / bass is low freqed, melody mid/high. Its hard, and its tough but thats the way.
But please do remember, dont master like they do on the video, mix it up, change something, just listen to your song and see whenever you've got the best mastering.
Thats about everything i can say atm.

My head...V.V

Sorry Im late. Anyway, the bassline didn't sound right. I love your lead synth. What plugin did u use? Ur kick seemed...dead. Give it an effect that spices it up. The melody seemed kinda dull too, no offence. But your use of effects cover that. When i say dull i meant the beginning. I like it throughout the song.Even though i like the lead the lead and bass didn't quite sync. Sorry if im astraightforward, but i have been sick for 3 months nonstop with no sign of recovery. Im not exaggerating. But i like this song, and i dont regret faving u as an artist as you never produce bad music.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

z3ta+

I think thats the sandstorm present you used. From bank C.
ANYWAY as i really like the lead, and if i say this im criticizing my own work, but rogue frequencies. Percussion was a bit dull, and a little quiet. Try to fix that.
Everything else if fine.
Regards....

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

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