Hmm...
Forgive me if this sounds rude, but your voice sounded like a whisper. With a song like this you need a yell with a certain reverb. And a delay. Unfortunately i cant overlook that single fact because if those weren't there the song itself could be better. I would give a ten, but your vocals.....
Bass......where is it V.V? Im not gonna subtract points for that because i dont use basslines either, but this song sorta needs it. I Couldn't figure out your lead synth because i just got z3ta+ and everything sounds the same. But Add some effect on that. It seems too plain. Overall i really like this song, and there is room for minor tweaks. Good luck!
Regards...
Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos