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Hmm...

Forgive me if this sounds rude, but your voice sounded like a whisper. With a song like this you need a yell with a certain reverb. And a delay. Unfortunately i cant overlook that single fact because if those weren't there the song itself could be better. I would give a ten, but your vocals.....
Bass......where is it V.V? Im not gonna subtract points for that because i dont use basslines either, but this song sorta needs it. I Couldn't figure out your lead synth because i just got z3ta+ and everything sounds the same. But Add some effect on that. It seems too plain. Overall i really like this song, and there is room for minor tweaks. Good luck!
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

Chimy!

My second mentor :D
Well all i really have to say to fix is the percussion. That, and a louder bass.
Songs like this need a term i came up with called Rejecting Bass.
Its when a bass kind of takes over for a song when the lead isnt present, and when it is present it enhances the lead entirely. Dont ask how i got the name, as i just sounded cool at the moment. The percussion need a change because io felt as though it didnt agree with the song. Overall i give an 8.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

Inreresting.

I like th concept. My only concern is that im asking if you used 3xosc If so then try a different synth. Also, the lead melody is good, but have a heavier bassline to back it up. Sorry if im straight forward, but im sick. So keep it up.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

Thank you.

Ive been sick for a while, and i needed a song like this to lift my spirits up.
Anyway let me get to the scorechart.
Melody-10/10
Pad-10/10
Percussion-9/10
Bassline-10/10
Voice Samples-10/10
The reason i gave you a nine on percussion is because that snare kinda turned me off. This song can be updated by change the snare. Maybe limiting the number of times you use it. Like Kick kick kick kick (x4) and then Introduce the snare. Because introducing the snare kinda ruined the flow. I really like the bassline. How did you make it? I never had good luck, and im working on a new remix. Oh well. I favorited this song, and i hope for a update.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

Hey azure

I still have the copy of ur flp so if people beg u wanna send them to me?

Personally your best work?

well you said personally. I Love this song, and is my second favorite from you, the first being sakura girl. Anyway, the bassline....well ill give it a 9/10. It was a little sharp for my taste at first. I got used to it though so i shouldnt complain. The melody was odd in a good way. I wasnt expecting a melody like this. At 1:36 how did you get the melody to have a reverb effect like that? I need the info. Anyway this is perfect. I Cant complain about it at all so 10/10.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

AikaMusic responds:

By sharp do you mean too loud and present? haha :P

hmm...

Nice job. I play guitar, and i love this. I wonder if i can tab this because i now want to play it. I have no experience on Edison, so when i learn it i will review any future works with it in it. Im in love right now because this song is awesome. You know im usually technical with reviews, but i cant do that on this one. Sorry. But i can say nice job!

Love it.

I LOVE IT.may i first pay my respects to Scatman John(Rest In Peace). He truly was a legend. This song is a good tribute. I Loved the quotes, the melody, and the choice of instruments. However, I still have my parts i need to contribute to. Im really sick, so im just gonna sum it up in a scorechart.
Melody= 10/10
Choice of instruments=9/10
Scatman John=20/10
Percussion=10/10
breakdown=10/10
Background melody=8/10
if i average this up without Scatman's score it would be around 9/10, but since he is in this song 10/10.
I Have a feeling this is 3xosc? I Think i can hear it. For winter can you use z3ta+? MY birthday is in winter, and that would be an awesome birthday present.
And if you need any help on the winter melody try Ice Cap Zone from sonic 3. You can alter it enough to call it original. But its your choice :D. Good luck on future songs!
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

IceMasterDlux responds:

Thanks so much, man! I am very glad that you like this song, so much, and that you love Scatman. He was amazing. I'm very glad that you enjoy this song so much, that really encourages me to hear that you love it! And yes, every single synth in this song is 3xOsc! I love 3xOsc's, they are really versatile. But sadly, I don't have z3ta :( The Ice Cap melody is a great idea! I love that song, it's one of the best Sonic songs I think. Thanks a lot for your review even though you're sick. I always appreciate your reviews! God bless you my friend!
!IceMasterDlux ><>

sweet

I love how this came out. The only thing that really got me is that not one of my favorites from you are in here. X(. But i cant vote you down for that because it was your choice as to put what in this song. You did a nice job making this megamix and everything came out perfectly. I Cant believe Roses are Red didnt make the list though. ANYWAY, try putting more effects to the synth as it didnt match up to the powerful kick. The reason im saying to not turn down the kick is because i liek my kicks to overpower :D. But yea thats all i got to say. Waiting to hear more from you so hurry up and make another masterpiece! :D
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

AikaMusic responds:

Haha thanks and yea I'm workin' on it :P

Hmm....

Well this is interesting. First when the intro is finished it kinda mashes together. Im not saying i didnt like it, but they seemed like they were fighting more than they were in harmony. The background and the snths i mean. The background needs a different preset because it doesnt complement the lead. The first background seemed like a chiptune, and considering that ur lead is an odd one it needs to complement it. Like soul eater, if you seen the anime. Sous need to match soul wavelengths when they become a Meister and weapon set. The background and lead needs to match up in some form to become a song. Also the background dint seem to have a set of match chords. Can you try to fix that because it made me almost say no to the song. But despite all that im writing here thats only part of the song. The scat part was epic. KEEP IT! Also try adding a scat sample inside of your song as you play it for it to actually be an obvious tribute to John Scatman(Rest In Peace). Overall its good, but needs some minor Tweaking.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

IceMasterDlux responds:

Wow, long review! I appreciate it though. I will think about changing the bass, because I thought it might sound a little weird. But that doesn't mean I will! This far in the song, I will probably keep it how it is already, but I value your opinion nonetheless. But I don't think I know what you meant about the chords. I'm pretty sure they're fine. But I'll give it another listen. And I'm glad you like the scat part, lol!! Scatman John was a great man, he really and truly was. I will miss him. Anyhow, I am glad that you liked it overall! Thanks a bunch for the long review, I am always glad to see when people put a lot of thought into their reviews! Thanks again my friend, and God bless you!
!IceMasterDlux ><>

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