I like it
Intro was nice! Snares with the kick doesn't suit this song. Try using it for breakdowns and such. Also Try using filters on your melodies. I love the transitions you had. How did you do it? If you dont mind I would love to see the FLP to this. Add me on MSN (although I probably wont be able to get one due to my computer being messed up).
/-Ikarus-\